Writing “Shattered”

I’ve been seriously upping my game this year. I started writing again about 3 years ago, after a hiatus too long to mention. And I couldn’t be happier. Honestly, part of the reason I stopped was because my writing skills weren’t up to the par of my imagination. A lot of life has happened since putting that pen down, and I believe I’ve gotten better at describing environment and emotion. I’ve also learned some of the tricky task of subtlety (my mother always said I was as subtle as a jackhammer). The biggest challenge for me now is writing believable dialogue. I’m tackling that hurdle in a short story I’m preparing for submission this Winter.

This flash fiction piece was an excerpt from my journal of free writing; the lavender paisley one I bought 3 years ago, that set me free and reminded me there’s good stuff in there if I want to share it. With a little guidance from Quincy, I augmented and refined it into something I’m moderately proud of, even more so since it’s the first piece I’ve ever submitted publicly.

It’s a moody story, but I’m proud of the tone I set. Hope you enjoy it. More to come!


For some continued enjoyment, here are links to some of my favorite local authors’ submissions to this very same contest:

Guy Anthony De Marco: Seeds

Sam Knight: Broken

Mary Villalba: Encounter

Josh Vogt: The Way the World Ends

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